There is something really odd about it that i can't really pin point what exactly is it, but i think... Maybe the aspect ratio should be taller instead of wider, maybe it's the random text there just, kinda there... Yeah it's weird the composition really, i guess i pin pointed it.
Here's a rough text mock up on what i'd suggest:
| | | /\ |\ |  ̄| ̄ | ̄ | ̄\
\/ \/ | ̄| | \| | | ̄ |__/
 ̄KLONOA OF THE WESTDEAD OR ALIVE: (reward but it's written YEEHAW on top) ^
^
| \ / \ ____
| \ | <  ̄  ̄ ̄----
| \ | / <
| \ <__
| <
| __\
| | ̄---- ^<\ \
| | _____ ̄| |0 | | < \
| |  ̄ __- ̄ ̄V \___ < \
\ | ̄ ̄ ̄ ̄\ /
\ \_-- ̄^ <__ >
> '<__/______  ̄>
<____ > ------>
<____/ > \
<- '| /
One little note tho, i added a little smile with a teeth, well at least
tried to since, i wanted him to look more "mischievous".
But, yeah, that's it really, don't worry if i wasted too much time while i could've just used photoshop to tell how the compisition could've been, i already know what i'm doing here.