[Tortwag]

Update again! Next Vision of Crusaders of Pugiland's coming up tomorrow - I finished it JUST now and would publish it if it wasn't 00:07 my time and if I didn't know the amount of time it usually takes me to correct everything.

See ya tomorrow, then! Currently trying to go at the pace of 600 words per day to make sure I'm ready on Sunday, since my chapters usually go from 3000 to 4200 words. Yes, even writers always need a little bit of maths. The irony.

EDIT: Make that: "during the week." Teacehrs told us today that we had reached the last 2 months of school. Which means an increase in homework, and less time from me to write.

I'm... Really sorry. But y'know, the chapter's there on my computer, so's the follow up, so I can at least guarantee that it'll come out and that I won't. Stop. Writing. That's the only consolation you can get for now. *sigh*

[SyraxAxoJaxco]

Oww... i was planning for double review...
But seeing this...

Alright, gonna comment that chapter soon.
One thing i can say,
SUCH AN OP BATTLE...

[Tortwag]

@SyraxAxoJaxco  Welp, maybe that double review might happen, BECAUSE VISION 2-4 IS COMING OUT RIGHT NOW.

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[Voka~Daemyn]

I've not been able to catch up on the story of this yet. However Thank you for this fan spin off. I am happy that you've been writing this it seems to keep people interested.

[Tortwag]

@Vokadae you're very welcome! I'm just glad to know that people are reading this from time to time 
And no rush! Catch up with this whenever you can. After all, aside constructive criticism, just normal comments are always appreciated 

[SyraxAxoJaxco]

[spoiler=1st opinion]An OP battle between Komm and Klonoa. :)
I'm totally fine with a battling chapter like this one.

But, :|
remember that [b]life isn't filled only with unfair duels[/b].
[size=6pt][s]Maybe Klonoa's [s]life[/s] is an exception[/s]
Just remembered that these all are in his dream :v[/size]
TBH, [b]i'm afraid[/b] that you'll [b]fill this story[/b] with only this kind of [b]OP duels[/b].
Y'know...Daii...*cough

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Dunno,
but you're [b]already giving out 2[/b] of your [s]OP:v[/s] [b]OCs[/b] in this story. (Daii and Komm)

Don't you think that's [b]too quick for a long-term story[/b] like this? :unsure:
I hope you get a lot of ideas for this story then, [b]especially for the characters[/b]...

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I never make a chapter which specially contains a duel. :embarassed:
So what can i say? This one is [b]nice[/b] by [b]my side of view[/b].

[size=7pt]Guess i'm not a battling writer then...[/size]
[size=5pt]A ramble, halp :v[/size]

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And yet [b]you able[/b] to [b]twist the plot[/b] like this. :hey:
Not really a surprise though, since [b]the story is [i]still[/i] just starting[/b], i suppose?

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Anyway, [b]Komm the Gourmet Blade[/b]. ;)
It's attacks are different depending on which blade it uses.
Never thought that one, [b]+1 originality[/b].

Why Komm makes me remember about Sea Salt ice cream... x_x
[s]Kingdom Heart preference. :v[/s]

WHO IS KOMM??
MALE? FEMALE?
[b]+1 originality[/b] again.

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[spoiler=1st opinion]Oh, so Komm is a bragger. :bad_straight_face:
[b]Not a surprise[/b] for me if he/she battles fiercely...

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Okay, we [b]get a lot of new names[/b] here.
If my list here is wrong, tell me.

Komm as [i]Gourmet[/i].
Lilyacoo as [i]Luna[/i].
Daii as [i]Pattern[/i]. ([b]<why though??[/b])
[i]Zaya[/i], a new OC.

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Okay, [b]this backstory is deep[/b]. :|
We will open it one by one as the story goes, i know.

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Hmm, a peanut should not forget its skin. :)
You keep that in mind, and you give some references from another Klonoa game.
[b]Not a bad job[/b] to attract others to [b]play all[/b] of Klonoa games.

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[b]I'm suspecting a foul play here[/b]. :angry:
[i]Lun[/i]...

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Well, this fanfic has reached another level of deepness, i think.
But nice Klonoa fanfics that i met always have this kind of deep story.
Oh well, [i]long live Klonoa fanfics' writers[/i] :v

This isn't an offense, (just in case) okay?

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These are more like rambling to me...

[Tortwag]

@SyraxAxoJaxco

Vision 2-3:

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Vision 2-4:

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Naaaah! Defintely opinions, and I need that, because they're fun to read, can be inspiring, and are really fun to answer to. I hope you're enjoying my answers, too

[Tortwag]

I'm actually in time for once! The Vision is over and here it is 
(Typos shall be corrected as the week progresses: kinda late for me now, but I'm confident: there shouldn't been too many of these.)

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Shorter than usual, I know. But that's because the next one's gonna be full of surprises

[Tortwag]

I know I know.
I'm late again. And at this point I assume it's not a surprise.

But hear me out on this one. Starting tomorrow, i'll move into the final week of exams. I don't mean that in a "oh something about Life that I haven't prepared for and I'll be late because of it" way. I mean... That it's the actual, final week of exams I'll have to go through until september. So I HAVE to deal with it and keepon writing my 600 words when I can, but once I'm done with it, I'll catch up.

It's useless to say that I'm sorry, even though I am. I'll just calmly said what I've already said: I'm not throwing this story away, especially considering that after this, I'l have 2 months of utter freedomto write and keep on getting inspired.
So don't worry. Check this thread from time to town. Cursaders of Pugiland's hitting a few hiatus here and there, but it's not stopping anytime soon, for those of you who still read it

So, stay tuned as usual. 1/4 of the post has already been written, and as I've mentioned, it's a big one in terms of events - probably one of my biggest. You'll see what I mean when I'm back.

[SyraxAxoJaxco]

Oh wow, what happened to me until i didn't notice the update on the story??
Anyway, here~

I somehow don't like it if Komm brags that much. :unsure:
Though this [b]isn't so important[/b] to be counted as a [b]suggestion[/b]...

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DUDE, you have made this story not K+ again. :embarassed:
[b]Is she really a drama maker?[/b]

[i]CANT U CHIL, U BUNNEHHH[/i] :big_smile:

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That chant... :bad_straight_face:
This somehow reminds me of [i]Marie[/i] from [i]Persona 4[/i]...
Tsundere, but has a poetic soul inside. :v

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So, the next chapter is supposed to be Vision 3, right?
Looking for it~
Don't worry, i'm patient enough.