[Tortwag]

Double-posting here to announce that Vision 1-2 is out! You can either go back to Page 1 to read it, or find it down below:

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Enjoy! And as usual, comments, feedback and constructive criticism are always appreciated

Now! Vision 1-3 is already written as well, though it needs a LOT of polishing before bein' published. It's also the last of the "Vision 1" series, which means that we'll be switching to a brand new setting right after it. Stay tuned!

[SyraxAxoJaxco]

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[BinaryPulsar]

"running away from scary monsters fills Klonoa with determination"

i loved this chapter! ohhh, i like this new character. if things go how i think they're gonna go i might have a ship on my hands 

can't wait for the next chapter! it's been so long since i read a good Klonoa fanfic!

[Tortwag]

@SyraxAxoJaxco ...Hm. Can't quite see it. Is the typo in the sentence "Lilyacoo touched the one on the far left, and a paw-shaped emblem appeared on it." More specifically, the "and" placed right after the comma?
No plotholes! Yay, I fixed them all Gotta keep on writin' with them in mind.


@BinaryPulsar Yes. Yes it does That was actually my favorite scene. Klonoa's encounter with the wolf, I mean.
...I NEED to finish Undertale, I swear...

Thanks, 'cause I loved writin' it   Ohoh, we're having shipping previsions already? That didn't take long XD We'll see how things evolve, though.

That's good to know! Then I'll have to take on Syrax' advice and try to upload regularly, the idea pace being one Vision per week - and post updates in case I'm late or unable to write for a while. Hopefully I can keep up with that.

[Tortwag]

Bump! Due to computer messing with me, the next Vision shall be published tomorrow only. I hope the pace of one vision per week isn't too slow for you guys and gals

[Tortwag]

Vision 1-3:

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As usual, comments, feedback and constructive criticism is always appreciated. And this is going to be a two-parter, which means one last Vision before going into a Vision 2-Series. Stay tuned, folks

[BinaryPulsar]

OHHHHHH DAT CLIFF HANGER
You're gonna have me on my toes till the next chapter 
This chapter was great! I can't wait until the next one!

[Tortwag]

Hey Binary, glad you liked the chapter!

AMD YES, FINALLY THROWIN' IN SOME CLIFFHANGERS  Stay tuned! Do expect a few explanations next chapter 

[SyraxAxoJaxco]

...dunno, but when i read that part when [b]Klonoa acted so reckless[/b], it made me thought, "is this the real Klonoa that i knew..." :unsure:
Ah, but after i remember that he ALWAYS does that kind of thing in order to save other people, i'm [b]okay[/b] with that.

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[i]Lilya[/i]'Coo-Hatch....why with that "Hatch"... :bad_straight_face:
Well, in positive way of thinking, i think the boat's named [b]Coo-Hatch[/b] because it's a [b]manifestation of Lilyacoo's hope[/b].
Yes, i'm too poetic right now. [b]_._[/b]

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Beast Clan, Glyph Clan, and we still have [b]3 more Combat Clans to come[/b]. I wonder what those will be.. :smile2:

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That cliffhanger...i myself have made my speculation of what will happen next. Well, let's see if my guess is right. Remember that my imagination can run SO wild. TOO WILD, perhaps. :\
Vision 2 will be in the town, i suppose?
Don't stop writing, Mr. Torswag~

[b]Fully check[/b] your [b]Vision 1-3[/b] in the [b]front page[/b] and you'll understand about what i DO mean here. :|

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[Tortwag]

@SyraxAxoJaxco Sorry for my late response, but Vision 1-4 is READY to go! I'll answer you first, though :3

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There we go! NOW, for the big update!



Vision 1-4:

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Also, I figured out the problem on page 1: there's a limit of words and characters per each post, and I... well. I reached it. That's why it's not complete. So I guess I'll just have to post links to whatever pages the Visions can be found in, until I eventually post them all in Fanficiton.net.